hmm
I was a little dissapointed at the ending. I usually like fade outs in trance. It just sounds like you gaven up and haven't really thought of an ending.
Intro was perfect, smooth and slow. Good bass intro too, nice job. The synth was alright, but it sounds a bit too clubby for this type of trance. You still had good melodies tho with it. You should definately doo other songs like this. I also know that your using fl ;) If you want to have a piano in a song like one of your latest songs, dont ever use the piano preset. It sounds really off. Not really off but, sounds really bad if you know what i mean.
Good track over all. Definately worth a 5. check out my stuff soon? thanks!