I was a little dissapointed at the ending. I usually like fade outs in trance. It just sounds like you gaven up and haven't really thought of an ending.
Intro was perfect, smooth and slow. Good bass intro too, nice job. The synth was alright, but it sounds a bit too clubby for this type of trance. You still had good melodies tho with it. You should definately doo other songs like this. I also know that your using fl ;) If you want to have a piano in a song like one of your latest songs, dont ever use the piano preset. It sounds really off. Not really off but, sounds really bad if you know what i mean.
Good track over all. Definately worth a 5. check out my stuff soon? thanks!
Great track, definately good rating.
This is NOT a perfect track. The bass was a ltitle bit too soft. The synth melody needs to be A LOT louder. Hihats and snare need to be a lil bit louder. The bass needs some more bass EQ, the high note string at 2:00 needs to be a little bit louder. I know i have that problem too with volume and EQ stuff but, it's pretty hard to do ( in my case ). If your great at mastering in fl, plz pm me. Im having trouble with that in fl. Great stuff dood, keep up the good work. check out my stuff soon? thanks!
Excellent. Keep up the good work.
"due to the bass being too loud and stuff"
that made me lol.
Anyways, there's really not much too say. You have improven a lot with dnb. The bass should be a little bit louder to make the ppl on the dance floor go crazy when they drink beer.
Can't wait for the full version. PM me when you upload it. check out my stuff soon? thanks!
First it's too loud, then it's too quiet....aaaarrrrgh! :)
But don't worry - the bass will have its own little section for making those booties shake. lol
Thanks for the review!
Excellent. The right length for a full trance song. On to the stuff.
The piano didn't really sound like trance, but when the bass came in it did. The transition at around 0:25 was TOO sudden. I just felt like you gave up on the intro and just went right on for the main theme.
The woosh was maybe a bit too loud, but it did not scare me ;). Good trance synth around 1:11. Made the feel even a bit better.
Bass had too much high EQ, maybe turn the bass up a little more? It would sounds more full if you did.
The snare at 2:55 was a wrong choice. IT just felt too video game-ish instead of trance. But hey, you can change it whatever you want ;)
Overall, great stuff. very uplifting. Can't wait for more! check out my stuff soon? thanks!
Glad you like it! :)
The transition was supposed to be sudden, but I never thought it TOO sudden - I thought it was fine. :\ It might be a taste thing, as nobody else has said that yet...
It's fine that the whoosh didn't scare you, it wasn't supposed to. :P I didn't introduce anything at 1:11, maybe you mean the vox synth starting around 1:06? I liked that one a bit too - see the response to A-New-Decade's review, which also gave it a mention.
Yeah, the bass isn't that "bassy" in this song - I EQed it like that to make room for the boom of the kick, which I wanted to be very audible. ;D
Not much to say about the snare - I used a similar one in the original so I thought I would use one in this part, the part that most resembles it. ;) If anything, it doesn't sound like a video game - I was going for the same thing that I had in the original. (Go to http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/80127 to hear it, though I doubt you'll like it nearly as much as this one. :P)
Once again, glad you liked it! :D I'll check out your stuff, maybe even review something if I have time, but no guarantees. ;) Thanks for the review!
(Sorry if this is a late review). This is great dude! Great change up at 0:58. Makes me want to dance ( in my head). Too bad you get a virus every 10 mins :( I would love to hear the full version of this.
check out my stuff soon if you can? thanks!
even tho the arp exp. went wrong, this still sounds great! but you should definately still do dnb. your getting a lot better at it.
Thanks! I'll continue down the DnB path, haha
Some of the parts had a little bit of swing in it. Especially the melody at the end ;) Makes me want to dance a little bit.
You should try and make goa stuff, see how well you do with that. Check out the-xi.newgrounds.com if you want to hear some too.
I've uploaded a loop and it's my first upload, so whenever it comes out on to the AP, besure to review it. Thanks!
Thank you! I will..
Great song, it had great structure, good melodies, great beats, everything. But the only problem was that on headphones the bass was a bit to low on eq.
Probably set it up a little higher then it would be perfect. Other than that, great stuff. Keep up the good work.
Every thing was done well, but im not sure if i liked the changing pitches in your snares, even tho it fit in the song.
I did not like the synth in 1:41, it just didn't seem right for me.
The structure was good, fx's were awesome, rating: 8. Good job.
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